范文讲评：周末
「要求」
周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。
周末对于人们来说意味着什么。
每个人都有自己度周末的方式。
我是怎样度周末的。
「范文」
Weekends
Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example， people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.
Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days， some people can relax themselves by listening to music， reading novels， or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball， wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.
I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.
「评语」
全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。
范文讲评：节日出行
「要求」
和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑，因为各国风俗习惯不同，谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。
「范文」
Holidays and Outings
It is common in English to ask people about their holidays. In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this. If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about. And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed. Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.
Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions. They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.
Take vacaticn and long weekends. Never let vacation time expire.
「评语」
看完上文，可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。从这个角度来写“Holidays and Outings”这个题目可谓不无新义。但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。本文提供了这一范例。全篇也围这个问题来写，几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。比如它始终突出了这是一个话题，就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。
范文讲评：介绍你的学校
「要求」
下周将有一批外宾来校参观，请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。内容包括三方面：
校史和成绩。
学校规模和主要设施。
师生状况（词数100—120）。
「范文」
An Introduction
Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it. Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers. Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation. They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.
Our school is a key middle school in our province. It has thirty classes with over 130students. Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground. Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.
All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well. Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.
「评语」
文章简洁得体，结构鲜明，语言流畅，介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。
school 还有学派的意思，另外“一群鱼”叫做a school of fish.