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高考英语写作指南-英语作文的开头和结尾

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简介:第六章 英语作文怎样开头和结尾 一篇作文怎样开头和结尾,办法极多,无法一一列举。下面是常见的几种:1. 说明事情发生的时间、地点或背景;2. 介绍主要人物;3. 描写一个紧张或有趣的场面;4. 写一个短的 ...

第六章 英语作文怎样开头和结尾

一篇作文怎样开头和结尾,办法极多,无法一一列举。下面是常见的几种:
1. 说明事情发生的时间、地点或背景;
2. 介绍主要人物;
3. 描写一个紧张或有趣的场面;
4. 写一个短的对话;
5. 提出一个命题(即结论性的话);
6. 提出一个问题;
7. 提出一个错误或似是而非的说法;
8. 举出一个实例或现象;
9. 引用一个统计数字;
10.引用一个名言或格言
前四个办法可用于叙事文和描写文,后六个办法可用于说明文和议论文。无非是引起话题或提出问题,使读者明了文章要谈何人何事。这一点说清楚了,就该进入正文,那才是读者真正想看的部分。如果开头的部分太长,不仅浪费篇幅(从而也浪费读者的时间),而且还会使全文各部分比例失调,重点偏移,损害文章的效果。
   如果写一篇短文,开头的部分可占全文总长度的十分之一左右,最多也不要超过十分之二。有时候甚至可以将开头并入正文的第一部分。这样便看不出开头的一段,只是一两句话起了开头的作用。
   初学写作的人最好采用“直截了当”、“开门见山”式的开头,因为这有助于抓住重点、避免离题。取得一些写作经验之后,也可以试用由另外一事或一人引起正确的办法,但是要注意使过渡自然而迅速。这个写法用于叙事和描写较多,例如说故事可从一个次要人物说起,然后引出主要角色。
叙事文和描写文的结尾很难说有什么固定的方法,原则上是把事情说完,或至少可以告一段落。有一点可以考虑:把最重要(或最有趣,或给人印象最深)的一点放到最后说。这样便产生了一个高潮。使读者看完文章还可以有所回味。
说明文和议论文,在很多情况下,都是以某种结论性的话来结束。如果文章以一个命题开头,结尾最好是用不同的文字重申命题的意思。如果以一个问题开头,那么结尾就该是那问题的解答。下面具体谈一下首段和结论段的写作。

第一节 首段的写作

首段的写作方式一般为:1)运用事实性信息、调查或故事等引出话题,2)导入主题,然后提出自己的观点,也就是文章的论点
  首段开篇的方式常见的有:
1) 谚语法
  由于谚语一般已经被大家所接受,用谚语提出自己的观点也容易被读者所接受。
As the saying goes, "Money makes the mare go", (有钱能使鬼推磨)but there are many things we can't buy with money, such as time and true love. …
2) 定义法
  定义法是通过对文章中的关键词做一些简单或正面或反面的解释,限定其范围,这样比较有利于引出主题。
"Practice makes perfect" is an old saying. It tells us that it does not matter if we are clumsy at doing something. As long as we keep on trying and practicing, we will do a good job in the end.

3) 提问法
  通过提问一个或一连串的问题,可以激发读者的兴趣,从而引出主题。
a. Do you have many friends? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer?
b. What is a good student? Different people may have different answers to this question.

4) 概括法
  概括法指先总结文章内容所涉及的现状,然后引出主题。
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, the Internet has come into more and more homes and is playing a more and more important role in our work and daily life. It has become a must to us, but at the same time, Internet has also brought with it a lot of problems.

5) 故事法
  故事法指用简单有趣的故事激发读者的兴趣,从而提出自己的观点。如下面"Is Stress a Bad Thing?"

6) 引语法
  "Just as eating without liking harms the health, learning without interest harms the memory and can't be retained." From Vinci's words we can see how important it is to motivate the students in language learning.

7) 调查法
  为了得到读者的认可,文章的开始可以引出调查数据等,借以提出主题,如下面"Is Stress a Bad Thing?"的第一句话"Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet?"

8) 假设法
  假设法是指通过假设提出一种选择,交代文章要涉及的问题,从而提出文章的主题。
Suppose you were offered two jobs, one is highly-paid but rather demanding, the other is less demanding, but poorly-paid, which would you prefer? …

9) 综合法
  具体写作时,同学们没有必要拘泥于一种方式,可以将上述方法总和起来。

首段示例1:
题目:Is Stress a Bad Thing?
提纲:1)有人害怕压力
2) 有人认为压力并不是一件坏事
3) 我的看法

  " I can't stand the pressure and competition," explained one friend of mine when asked why he decided to quit his highly-paid but demanding position in his company recently. My friend may have his own reasons, but I don't think his decision is wise in reality.
  It is true that my friend's case is not unique. In the last few years quite a number of men and women have chosen to do something less competitive at the cost of a comfortable, easy life a highly-paid job can obtain. They are afraid that the stresses and strains of work will rob them of joy and happiness and do them harm both physically and mentally. In fact, however, stress isn't the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Unless it gets out of control, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and challenge, and to give purpose and significance to an otherwise meaningless, idle life. People under stress tend to express their full range of potential and to actualize their own personal worth - the very aim of a human life.
  Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to develop our adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape from it.

  就这一标题而言,根据所提示的提纲,首段的写作还可以采用下列方式:
1) According to a recent survey, in the last few years, quite a number of young people have chosen to quit their demanding but highly-paid jobs. Although they may have their own respective reasons, I don't think their decision is wise in reality.

2) Which job do you prefer, a highly-paid but very competitive position or a poorly-paid but also less demanding job? You may choose the latter and have your own reasons, but I don't think this choice is wise enough whatever reasons.

3) Faced with a hard and demanding task, people's attitude varies widely: some try to avoid it and others regard it as a challenge to their abilities. In fact the choice we make between "flight" or "fight make the difference between leaders and mediocrities(平庸之辈).

  首段示例2:

  标题:Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet?
  提纲: 1)随着科技的发展,网络越来越普及;
     2)网络有其优点但也有缺点;
     3)我的观点

  根据上面的提示,首段可有下列几种方式:
1) Nowadays, using the Internet has become a fashion. Many parents begin to teach their children to use the Internet. However, there are diverse opinions on this. Some think it wise, but I don't agree with them.

2) Today, the Internet is becoming more and more common. It begins to play a more and more important role in our society and life. It's so useful that most adults are learning how to use it. What about children? Of course they can start using it.

3) Today, with the development of science and technology, the Internet is beginning to play a more and more important role in our life. More and more people are starting to use the Internet, including schoolchildren. However, I think schoolchildren are too young to start using the Internet.

4) According to a recent survey, Internet users are becoming younger and younger, and Internet bars have become a resort for schoolchildren who log in to chat or play games. Faced with this phenomenon, many people argue for measures to prevent schoolchildren from using the Internet, and I think they have their reasons.

第二节  结论段的写作

英语写作的结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。
  常见的方式有:
1) 重述或总结主题
  重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题,与首段照应。
  Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life.

2) 提出建议
  Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards.

3) 概括总结
  As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city.

4) 引用名人名言
  In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said "Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability."

5)综合法
  与首段一样,结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来,总结加建议的比较多。

尾段示例1:

  如"网络"的结论段可以如下所示:
1)As we all know, the next century will become one of the Internet. Internet will become more and more important in both our daily life and our work. So I suggest that schoolchildren should start using the Internet.

2)So I think schoolchildren not only can start using the Internet, but also should start using it They are sure to benefit a lot from the internet.

3)Internet can help our children know the world, get useful information and enrich their knowledge. So I think schoolchildren can start using the Internet.

4)In a word (In conclusion/ In summary/ To sum up / In short), the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life and it is helpful for children's growth both physically and mentally. It is better for them to start using the Internet as early as possible.

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